**posts with red text have been revised after feedback.
Tuesday, 25 March 2014
Evaluation Q1: Draft 1 (Unfilmed)
This is the first draft of my evaluation question 1. For my second draft I will be filming my response and including the red text as still or moving images in order to reinforce what I am saying.
This is a fantastic piece for your video, Kaylie. Well done for referring to theory and integrating examples from your research into other texts.For this video one, it would be useful to create some kind of sub-headings within your response, for example Establishing Conventions, Following/Using conventions, Challenging Conventions etc.
You will need to cover the ancillary texts too. Perhaps you might like to film the video version and then write up the response to the print texts? They shouldn't take you as long as the video, but will still need some integrated images.
This is a fantastic piece for your video, Kaylie. Well done for referring to theory and integrating examples from your research into other texts.For this video one, it would be useful to create some kind of sub-headings within your response, for example Establishing Conventions, Following/Using conventions, Challenging Conventions etc.
ReplyDeleteYou will need to cover the ancillary texts too. Perhaps you might like to film the video version and then write up the response to the print texts? They shouldn't take you as long as the video, but will still need some integrated images.