"I've watched the first draft and your first round of feedback ... and I'm so pleased you chose my song as the soundtrack for your video. You've done the track an incredible justice, and your ability to critique your own work and creativity rivals mine even now at 22. I agree with the changes that might need to be made, but nothing that you hadn't already identified yourself. Seriously, you've done an amazing job, and your attention to detail means that you won't ever go far wrong! I'm excited to see subsequent drafts and feedback, and obviously I can't wait to see that final product! I'd love you to storyboard a track of mine called 'Berlin', when things with A2 and uni applications have calmed down, and when I finally film it, I'd love you to direct it!"
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Emily's feedback was largely very positive and flattering! She has agreed that the parts of the video I highlighted to her (the missing parts and the feedback from the audience) need to be altered in order to improve it. I'm pleased that she felt I did the song justice as this was the main thing I wanted to achieve. I will continue to edit the video in order to make sure I follow the audience feedback and improve it.
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