First Screening

I screened my music video in order to gain feedback from a range of audience members - predominantly my target audience. To gain a wider perspective I screened the video at college, where a mixture of students and teachers came to watch, and online where audience members answered a short survey. I collected the results and came to some conclusions based on the questions I asked:

As I am currently still waiting for feedback from Emily Denton, I will begin to act upon some of the advice already given. I plan to re-film some of the scenes with Sophie to cut out the garage door and have a wider range of shots. What's more, there are a couple of additional shots I plan to film in order to make the narrative slightly more understandable.